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Post by RainbowFire95 on Feb 19, 2017 9:58:15 GMT
After abit of trial and error on my other tracks i have finished with a track that i'm very happy with and i really enjoy, it does include a pit lane for anyone interested. The track uses the stunt pieces to bridge over the Alamo sea to connect Sandy Shores and Grapeseed, giving you the best of both without using the freeway. Enjoy Alamo Sea GP - From the fast flowing roads of Grapeseed, to the tight turns of Sandy Shores. It's the same roads you know and love just connected together abit differently. rsg.ms/0fa2e81 |
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Feb 19, 2017 10:42:22 GMT
My Thoughts:Positives- Well made. Some transitions from road to track pieces are smooth. - Visually appealing. Good picture to show it off. Apex barriers are well placed. - Very fun to drive. Some corners are excellent. - Adds uniqueness to bog-standard Sandy Shores/Grapeseed tracks. - Checkpoints all placed well. Areas For Improvement- Some transtions are a little bit rough. - Some, but not all people won't like the roads in Sandy Shores ignored and replaced with mainly stunt track pieces. - The name of the track is not very original. I believe there are several tracks with that same name. I suggest you change it. Verdict: If not already, submit this to Broughy's Thursday YT Streams. This track is definitely worthy of being Stream! You can submit tracks to be played on his live stream on Thursdays at 7pm UTC on YouTube here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxfLDVmpXkI&list=PLx_tHjuVuROCP0k8Ixapte-Hw2gfZPaHE&index=16 see description for link.
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Post by RainbowFire95 on Feb 20, 2017 14:45:59 GMT
Thanks for the feedback  , will definitely do some 'smoothing around the edges' so to speak. I will also come up with a better name, after a quick search, you are right there are a few tracks with similar or the same name. I already have another track submitted to Broughy that is yet to be played (i'm sure it is good enough to be played eventually) i don't know if submitting a second track before the first one has been played will over right the first submission? |
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Feb 20, 2017 15:57:16 GMT
Thanks for the feedback , will definitely do some 'smoothing around the edges' so to speak. I will also come up with a better name, after a quick search, you are right there are a few tracks with similar or the same name. I already have another track submitted to Broughy that is yet to be played (i'm sure it is good enough to be played eventually) i don't know if submitting a second track before the first one has been played will over right the first submission? As of now you cannot submit more than 1 track. Broughy will re-open it I believe so you can submit a second maybe in a few weeks. If you want a definite answer as a Xbox commissioner. equationunequal will give you an answer. |
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Post by RainbowFire95 on Apr 24, 2017 15:27:17 GMT
**NEW VERSION** Alamo Sea GP - Long Mostly the same track, but this version features a different route into Grapeseed to include more of the normal road rsg.ms/d46059f |
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Apr 24, 2017 15:48:58 GMT
GG on getting Alamo Sea GP in the stream btw. Brough seemed to like it, like i did too. |
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Post by RainbowFire95 on Apr 24, 2017 19:18:16 GMT
GG on getting Alamo Sea GP in the stream btw. Brough seemed to like it, like i did too. Thanks mate, i was actually surprised it got on there so quickly |
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, will definitely do some 'smoothing around the edges' so to speak. I will also come up with a better name, after a quick search, you are right there are a few tracks with similar or the same name.