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Post by imfishy on Aug 7, 2016 23:03:53 GMT
Hey Guys, so after the Creator update i wanted to give that thing a try and did my first track. Now i just want to get some thoughts on the track and suggestions, any feedback really. I would appreciate some constructive criticism. I had a lot of fun building the Track (even after some wierd bugs and continously rotating probs) and want to get better at it. Here's my first creation The goal was to create a track with a little racetrack flare to it, by using the Senora Desert area and the new stunt props. Thanks already for reading and even more thanks if you tried the track and can give some feedback. |
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moppaking
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Post by moppaking on Aug 9, 2016 13:02:49 GMT
I see some nice ideas, for example the floating repair kits to indicate the pit lane entry. Little typo in the description. I hope you used stunt pro ps and dont have stunt pro bs  The first building block on the right side closing the gap to the guard rail of the first right turn should be adjusted smoothly to the rail so you can not get stuck when hitting it. Other than that, brilliant track in my opinion. |
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Post by imfishy on Aug 9, 2016 13:24:13 GMT
Ill adjust the guardrail and correct the typo, as soon as possible. What do you think about the yellow and Black colors scheme, is it too much? What do you think about the first chicane on the highway, does it slow you down too much, should it just be a highspeed chicane? Thanks for trying the track and giving some feedback. P.S. ill try your new creation as soon as possible and provide some feedback in return  . Just wanted to say that i really like your Pisswasser Grain GP and looking forward to try the new one |
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Post by moppaking on Aug 9, 2016 13:58:46 GMT
About the color scheme, I have seen two concepts so far. A: all the same. B: mainly grey and sometimes striking colors to indicate special or complicated turns. Both are legit and in your case, the yellow/black scheme fits into the desert surrounding. The first chicane on the track itself (giant tyre) is ok, but i would remove the Grotti billboard next to it. Problem is if you hit it when running wide, the tyre wall gives you a complete stop. Use sth that does not catch on the car, like the classic barriers or the new colored blocks. Or move the billboard down into the ground so that the tyre part is underground. I think the board itself does not catch as easy as the tyre wall at the bottom. The first highway chicane could be a bit more speedy imho, like the second one. But that's up to you |
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Post by imfishy on Aug 9, 2016 14:13:11 GMT
great! thanks a lot, i may apply some changes soon and the Grotti billboard was already on my radar aswell |
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Post by Nick420Guy on Aug 10, 2016 8:18:41 GMT
Awesome will check it out as soon as I get home. Have a look over this if you get the time and let me know what you think please. Blaine county 420Still a work in progress as I have the same tire/billboard barrier issues on 1 corner as you. Also things look shorter in the creator and huge in a car so need to lower some corner props. |
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Post by imfishy on Aug 11, 2016 8:00:31 GMT
I worked in some changes yesterday or even two days back: -No sticky tirewalls anymore in the first chicane -A faster chicane near You Tool -Checkpoint improvements -Some cosmetic changes to the start/finish straight Nick420Guy ill take a look into it this afternoon. |
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Post by Maty47 on Aug 12, 2016 13:29:27 GMT
Love the track. Only downside for me is the pits. In my first try I always thought that I should go Straight but Probably thats just me. Good job  |
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. Just wanted to say that i really like your Pisswasser Grain GP and looking forward to try the new one
