adman4898
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Posts: 8
Registered on: March 2017
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Post by adman4898 on Aug 30, 2017 0:55:18 GMT
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adman4898
Member
Posts: 8
Registered on: March 2017
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Post by adman4898 on Sept 7, 2017 7:30:17 GMT
does anyone have any feedback for me? it would be a lot to me, thanks
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Post by imfishy on Sept 8, 2017 9:39:42 GMT
ill send you a msg in the forums, and give some feedback
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Post by Hengo_Genonath on Sept 12, 2017 1:15:34 GMT
Hey Adman, first some general things: - you could sink nearly every prop lower in the ground. I found it hard to see where the track was going next, because you can't look over the barriers. This is a problem especially in front of corners. - in the second half of the track you limited the track to a, in my opinion, too small part of the normal road. In some places the track was only 2 or maybe 3 car width wide. - although you limited the track that much there are too many big trafficlights, lamp posts, etc. on the track. Normally not direct on the racing line, but you should think about, that there might be 2 or more people going side by side through your corners - you are using stunt tubes for the inside barriers of corners. Thats not the worst descision, but their hitboxes are not as round and clean as one might think. I think the Stunt Targets are a better choice for longer and wider turns, while for tight turns you could use the green gastank from the machines category or the concrete tube from the construction category. - and then one optical thing, that might only bother me because I'm from germany, but the top edges of your barriers to not fit each other and that simple doesn't look good There are some things concerning specific placements of props or checkpoints, but maybe you already have some things you'd like to work on and maybe your track already gets streamlined a little. I hope that was helpful to you
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