Chesss731
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Registered on: October 2014
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Post by Chesss731 on Jan 12, 2015 23:35:20 GMT
I made a race. It's like you didn't guess. Name: Mirror Park GP Location: IDK either... Length: 1.4 Miles Players: 30 Props used: 100 (all static) Link: socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/jobs/job/TWI0YC_WZEmti9GCbF-olQIgnore the bad grammar in the description, but I want FEEDBACK. Reply if you thought I'm 'Not as bad as it seems' and mention if I should continue making these races and one day, use them. Cheers! Chesssie.
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moppaking
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Post by moppaking on Jan 13, 2015 18:24:57 GMT
Nice and short track. Depends on your taste if it is appropriate to wrap tire stacks around critical lamp posts or not. I've seen a few ones that might get knocked over. You could leave out two or three checkpoints on the straights. I get your point to show directions on every junction, but on a straight line there's really no need for that close repetitive straightforward hints. Furthermore, it reduces your reacion time when approaching the next turn. If there's some more space to the next checkpoint you can prepare yourself better. The marked points below are the ones i consider obsolete.
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Chesss731
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Registered on: October 2014
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Post by Chesss731 on Jan 17, 2015 0:32:16 GMT
So lamp posts, excess checkpoints and grammar... Thanks!
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