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Post by SakiBomb on Apr 4, 2015 23:46:39 GMT
You were kinda drowned out by the beat at one part, but I really liked it. This kind of beat really suits your style and I definitely felt the flow. Bravo.
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Post by Renegade1911 on Apr 4, 2015 23:56:58 GMT
I like it. You're getting better from my point of view! Suggestions: I think you should make your voice louder, or quiet down the beat. So far the beat is dominant in your records, not you. Also try adding a bit more energy and aggression to your act. This is not the church, but the wasteland of life, the battlefield that is the streets! I play hockey. There's this trick I use before every match and every shift. I pump myself up, give myself this kind of an enrage. I play defense, so my job is to brutalize the opponent, get them the hell out of our zone and make them regret every second they spend inside it. If I go in angry and ready to roll, I perform much better than when I go in all calm and chilled. So you could try that, as it helps! Give yourself an energy boost, shout, pound your chest. Anything to bring out the beast that lurks below!
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Chrisivisi
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Post by Chrisivisi on Apr 4, 2015 23:58:17 GMT
That's what I said: make your voice loud and proud
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Post by rdt33 on Apr 5, 2015 2:01:49 GMT
Thank you again guys for sticking with me on this. I've got two videos rolling out tomorrow that I think were mixed a lot better than the last couple. I might start looking into actual studio/equipment for the summer months to re-record everything and fix a few lines, add a few lines, etc. to make everything as best as it can be. STAY TUNED!
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Post by rdt33 on Apr 5, 2015 2:04:09 GMT
I'm probably going to try mixing that song and upload it again
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Post by rdt33 on Apr 7, 2015 13:58:31 GMT
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Post by rdt33 on Jun 3, 2015 16:54:01 GMT
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Post by Renegade1911 on Jun 4, 2015 21:15:24 GMT
As I said before, I suggest using simpler beats. Beat is a boat carrying you to your destination, but you need to be its engine. I suggest using some Fort Minor beats, like High Road or Petrified.
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Post by rdt33 on Jun 30, 2015 17:04:20 GMT
MY MIC IS HERE! I've already revised and rewritten a lot of verses on certain songs. Recording starts ASAP. Ry the Visionary comin atcha!
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Post by rdt33 on Jul 8, 2015 0:35:19 GMT
Ok. So here is a question I would like to propose. Do I....
A) Upload the new versions of songs as is with titles such as 'Girl' Rerecorded and Remastered while leaving the other versions up
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B) Delete the old versions of songs as I upload the new ones
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Post by Mid1010 on Jul 8, 2015 0:36:42 GMT
I would say keep the old ones so we can see, or rather hear, the improvements.
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Post by rdt33 on Jul 8, 2015 0:40:10 GMT
I would say keep the old ones so we can see, or rather hear, the improvements. First responder gets his way! Newest upload will be for Regnomo
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Post by SakiBomb on Jul 8, 2015 1:55:59 GMT
I would say keep the old ones so we can see, or rather hear, the improvements. +1
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Post by rdt33 on Aug 8, 2015 20:31:06 GMT
Latest track. Was in a special place for this one. Wrote and recorded it today in about 4 hours, so it may seem a bit rushed.
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Post by rdt33 on Oct 8, 2015 13:30:13 GMT
Quick update for anyone still interested.
So I doubt anyone remembers this, but I in no way will be able to release a body of work by the 10th. At this point, I'd be happy to get it out by next year. I want every song to be the best that I could possibly pick. I've already recorded about 25 songs in the past, I'm going to record maybe 5 more, and I'm going to pick 10 of those to go onto an EP/mixtape.
As many of you might know, the goal of this isn't to get famous or whatever, even if that would be the coolest thing ever. I mean could you imagine that. Y'all would be like, "Oh yeah! I helped that guy out in the beginning. That's cool I guess." Focus, Ryan. Anyway. The goal is to make music that I like and that I can listen to proudly that I created something. Whenever this thing comes out, I'm not going to ask everyone to go out and throw CDs at people on the streets, but I wouldn't mind if everyone gave it a download and created some buzz around it. I'm trailing off now, a little bit loopy from some NyQuil, and ready to write 2 essays.
Thanks everybody
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