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Post by FriendlyBaron on Mar 7, 2017 6:45:17 GMT
Use this thread to share, review and discuss single tracks.
When posting a track of yours to review, you must first review the previously posted track (and then whoever posts after you will review your track). You are also free to post a review without posting your own track, of course. Please make your reviews worthwhile, informative, and at least a few sentences! Think about the kind of feedback you want on your own track. Bad statements to include:- It was bad
- It was okay
- It was good
- I don't like stunt races
- You suck at making tracks
Good statement examples:
- Good work on Turn X, I really liked that creative use. (You don't always need to say something needs changed, in which case, tell them what was good)
- I think your propping in the chicane area could be better.
- Take a look at <linked track> to see how they do <certain thing>, you may get some inspiration to improve your track there.
- I liked the layout, but your propping could be better, try to not use props in <some way> and instead use <another way> instead.
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Mar 7, 2017 16:57:11 GMT
I guess I'll start this overdue conversation off then! Beeker's Beach Bashrsg.ms/1409c89 A fun RC circuit around Paleto Bay with a few jumps here and there. Designed specifically for San Andreas' 4th best mechanic, you begin on tarmac and head across onto the beach followed by some dirt section and then a quick sprint back up the the start/finish, where there is a pit-lane too. I've already had plenty of feedback on this track, and I look to make more improvements. Comments and constructive criticism is highly appreciated and listened to. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 13, 2017 15:54:13 GMT
I guess I'll start this overdue conversation off then! Beeker's Beach Bashrsg.ms/1409c89A fun RC circuit around Paleto Bay with a few jumps here and there. Designed specifically for San Andreas' 4th best mechanic, you begin on tarmac and head across onto the beach followed by some dirt section and then a quick sprint back up the the start/finish, where there is a pit-lane too. I've already had plenty of feedback on this track, and I look to make more improvements. Comments and constructive criticism is highly appreciated and listened to. My review: + Great mixture of tarmac and dirt sections. + Nice mix of corners and straights. + Unique Layout. + Pit Lane. - Jumps could be vastly improved. - Not very visually appealing (decorate the track more). Final score: 7.7/10 |
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Mar 13, 2017 17:01:42 GMT
unknownace24 aichiyota It would be more appreciated if you did what Brocli did and posted feedback when you have tried the track, not saying you will try it, to keep the flow of the thread being: a)Post a track b)Give feedback to previous track and post a track c)Give feedback to previous track and post a track etc. Thanks.  PS: @brocildrop4334 if you put a title and pic of Motor4Miler, I will give you feedback.
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Post by aichiyota on Mar 13, 2017 20:49:54 GMT
Hi, sorry maybe a mod could delete those post please.
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So now for the testing of your track.
I really liked it.
+nice layout
+good mix of different corners
-would like more dirt sections
-dont like the powerline posts in the middle of the track
- the jump from the beach could be a bit smoother
I think all negatives are more personal preference and really minor so overall
8/10 will keep this track in my bookmarks fore sure.
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Mar 13, 2017 20:55:49 GMT
Hi, sorry maybe a mod could delete those post please. .............. So now for the testing of your track. I really liked it. +nice layout +good mix of different corners -would like more dirt sections -dont like the powerline posts in the middle of the track - the jump from the beach could be a bit smoother I think all negatives are more personal preference and really minor so overall 8/10 will keep this track in my bookmarks fore sure. Thanks for the feedback! You can delete your own posts in threads by the way, even if you are not a commissioner. Click the icon in the top right of your post and it will bring up the delete post option i believe. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2017 14:40:13 GMT
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Post by DaSpekyLegend on Mar 28, 2017 17:42:00 GMT
Motor4Miler
- Fun in many classes (Super, Sport Classics, Muscle, Sports)
- Good apex props and smoothening
- Fire rings :kappa:
- Corner after the long straight through Sandy Shores is challenging but fun as it sets you up for the upcoming corner after that.
- Lack of visual appeal. Nothing bad, just nothing stands out.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2017 18:03:20 GMT
Motor4Miler
- Fun in many classes (Super, Sport Classics, Muscle, Sports)
- Good apex props and smoothening
- Fire rings :kappa:
- Corner after the long straight through Sandy Shores is challenging but fun as it sets you up for the upcoming corner after that.- Lack of visual appeal. Nothing bad, just nothing stands out.
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Post by RcNumbers on Apr 4, 2017 8:18:39 GMT
I find it pretty funny that 360 is still included but we all know that there isnt anyone on the 360 except for me.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2017 14:51:09 GMT
I find it pretty funny that 360 is still included but we all know that there isnt anyone on the 360 except for me. I cry evry tim |
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Post by RcNumbers on Apr 6, 2017 11:06:10 GMT
I find it pretty funny that 360 is still included but we all know that there isnt anyone on the 360 except for me. I cry evry tim watch from 0:46 |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2017 14:36:53 GMT
Welcome everyone to meme central.
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Post by unknownace24 on Apr 6, 2017 15:49:34 GMT
I find it pretty funny that 360 is still included but we all know that there isnt anyone on the 360 except for me. I cry evry tim Someone should make a poll to see how many people still have a 360, and we try to revive the NODO 360 crew once more! Lol. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2017 20:30:07 GMT
Someone should make a poll to see how many people still have a 360, and we try to revive the NODO 360 crew once more! Lol. I think a lot of people still own a 360 though.  I'll make a poll to see how many peeps still play GTAO on the 360. Anyway, could we please move the chat topic back onto tracks. Thank you. |
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I'll make a poll to see how many peeps still play GTAO on the 360.